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11-01-2010, 10:39 PM | Post: #1
xCptxJxLukexFx 
PLEASE READ! Zach has suggested I change the title to keep it alive. I'm going to do much more than just the title. This is now a forum where you can post any short piece of writing. You can post a short story, (keep it one chapter) a poem, or any other short piece of writing. In the experimental writing thread you can write anything (keep it PG please). So write away!

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Cpt J Luke F

Stabbed in the Heart - Poem
Song of Achilles - Poem
Frying Pan - Poem
Breaking - Challenge submission
Mr Hyde - Poem
Ghost - Short Story
Country - Short Story
Wake up Call - Poem
Don't Retreat my Friend - Poem
Time is Taking It's Toll - Poem
The Hand That Holds Us - Poem
Infliction - Short Story
Join the Club and Sing my Song - Poem
I'm Sorry, but You've Done This Before - Poem
Brown Eyes and Day Dreams - Poem
The Darkest Street - Poem (incomplete)

Zeroed

Water - Poem
ODST - Poem
House - Challenge submission

Zachery0015

Ode to Sly's Hatred of Spam - Poem
The Prison - Poem
Dark Tapestry - Poem
EGO Anhelo - Poem

IamAries

I swear - Poem
Void - Poem

Sharpshooter

Ode to Flatulence - Poem

Dimitri

Lies - Poem

WandererinRain

Ice Cream - Poem

TommySneak

Wages of War - Poem
Propaganda - Poem

Annilator

Medic - Poem
No Brothers in Arms - Poem
Writers' Hymn -Poem
Operation: Humanity - Short Story

NanoAce

The Shunned Artist - Poem
I Really Don't Care - Poem

Nightowl
Various raps - song(s)
I guess I'm Alright - Poem

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Stabbed in the Heart

I gazed into your shattered eyes,
Your still beating black heart laced it’s lies into mine,
I was high on your pride,
I followed you to both our deaths,
Left in a pool of blood and deceit,
Your hands that wrought so much destruction grasped mine,
I brought the pain,
That’s what you said but you opened the doors,
Your ways are my hell,
Shortcut to no where,
You stabbed my heart,
Let the flame come down and burn it all,
Burn inside me melt your old ways,
I saw so much hate,
You wore a disguise of pleasure,
All you brought was my fall,
The mask fell while you held the knife,
My hatred was ignited as I drew my final breath,
I leaned on your crutch of lies,
Your broken crutch of lies,
You stabbed my heart that had already died,

Not the greatest, but it is a picture of struggles in the world.

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11-01-2010, 10:42 PM | Post: #2
Zeroed 
That was.............................................................................​........moving(not the bowel type, but emotionaly)
I don't have poetry of my own though.

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11-01-2010, 10:47 PM | Post: #3
Borren 
Idea
Dodgy
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11-01-2010, 11:27 PM | Post: #4
Cyblos 
I'm really not sure what to make of that .... You either have potential talent, or are in need of psychological help, tough call 0.o

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11-01-2010, 11:29 PM | Post: #5
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I hope the first one, but sometimes I'm not sure about my sanity.

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12-01-2010, 12:08 AM | Post: #6
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(11-01-2010 11:29 PM)xCptxJxLukexFx Wrote:  I hope the first one, but sometimes I'm not sure about my sanity.

Sanity is just a very boring part of Insanity.

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12-01-2010, 02:45 AM | Post: #7
xCptxJxLukexFx 
I'm working on a new one called "Song of Achilles". If anyone has something that you would like to post please do.

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12-01-2010, 02:51 AM | Post: #8
Zeroed 
I would like to post this.

The water ripples
It shines in its brilliance
So unimaginably important
And yet never remembered
The drink of life
Has been set asside for better
Coffee drives people now
As water stills forgotten

Ok, I call this, Water. Lol, just made it up. Please rate, do not bash.

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12-01-2010, 02:53 AM | Post: #9
xCptxJxLukexFx 
It is actually really nice. I should post my short poem called frying pan. One sec I'll get it!

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12-01-2010, 02:54 AM | Post: #10
xCptxJxLukexFx 
Shh no one repeat this. This was inspired by my mom who doesn't cook.

The Frying Pan

Frying pan oh frying pan why do you stand alone,
Your smile I never see,
The doors lay unopened and the heat you once knew is gone,
The paper plates laugh and dance,
No one needs you see the lonely pan.

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12-01-2010, 02:57 AM | Post: #11
Zeroed 
That just displayed the fact that new technology has deprived children of the old glory and joy of old-fashioned tech that allowed people to be more hands on.
Great job.

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12-01-2010, 02:59 AM | Post: #12
IAmAries 
I'd love to post poetry here, but I fail when it comes to making peotry. I also don't find it as enjoying as writing a story.

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12-01-2010, 03:12 AM | Post: #13
xCptxJxLukexFx 
Here is my latest poem.

Song of Achilles

My hands are shaking,
I feel the pains of yesterday,
Bloodshed and lost causes haunt my dreams,
Fights of old sparked again,
Deaths of old friends scatter my hope,
Arrows of no regret pierce my skin,
The innocent perish as the unrighteous reap the rewards,
This is where I fall,
So much hurt for such a small world,
My spear is a cornerstone of destruction,
My heart is so cold,
I watch children cry and mothers mourn,
The fathers fall at my feet,
Their blood litters the palace gate,
Troy so ripe for failure is now rank with death,
My hand that brought so much pain falls in sand,
Who will mourn my death,
Who will remember the song of Achilles,

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12-01-2010, 03:17 AM | Post: #14
xCptxJxLukexFx 
I challenge anyone to get the last post with a poem!

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12-01-2010, 03:26 AM | Post: #15
Zeroed 
You have defiled to much!! I will create new poem instentaneously.

He bashes you
He bashes me
He will bash everybody
His painful words
Full of hate
Twist and turn
In his evil fate
Who is this man
You ask me
For it is plain and simple
ODST

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ThisAin'tRight Wrote:"Everything, new and old, will eventually be buried by this new thing, called 'spam' and other threads."
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12-01-2010, 10:11 PM | Post: #16
xCptxJxLukexFx 
I have a new idea. Although Zeroed is the only one who has presented poetry, I want to start a couple challenges. You can submit a poem that has nothing to do with the challenge.

This is just an idea, I want Zeroed's opinion before I start this. The challenges would vary, but this is one example I can up with off the top of my head.

"Write a poem about anger using a house as an analogy."

Then you would submit your poem it can be as short as you want or as long as you want. What do you guys think?

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12-01-2010, 10:45 PM | Post: #17
Zeroed 
I think the contests would be a great idea Smile

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12-01-2010, 10:47 PM | Post: #18
Zeroed 
The house creaks in anger
Boards groan and bend
The rage flickers from candle heads
The flame of anger flourishes
For it has been greater than a century
'Twas once a visit there
Now it is roaring in its agony
of rusting to the spot.

IDK, randomly made this.

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ProtoNoob(The Best) SlySoldier(The Comedian)
Wonderboy123(Mr. Waffles) SigmaSlugger(The Scary)
Me(TheOddball)
ThisAin'tRight Wrote:"Everything, new and old, will eventually be buried by this new thing, called 'spam' and other threads."
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12-01-2010, 11:01 PM | Post: #19
xCptxJxLukexFx 
Breaking

The lights flare up like the tone of your voice
The emptiness is breaking my soul,
Once a place of laughter,
Now as cold as your heart,
Where is the hope I dreamed about,
My heart breaks at every thoughtless word,
The palace of my father dies with my scarred heart,
You tread upon the ground where I used to dance,
Why are you breaking me in,
The cracks in the window match the tears on my cheeks,
Raised voices turn inside my mind,
Don’t you know the damage I have seen
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Very nice poem, zeroed.

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12-01-2010, 11:11 PM | Post: #20
Wonderboy123 
Im not really a fan of poetry....

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