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Allrighty then heroes, here we go! It's time for the ultra review of a short story called 'The Battle'. It sounds cheesy, but it isn't.
Story: The Battle
Author: K.U.S.T
Review:
Our old pal KUST has once again blown us away with a short story of his that has been perfected in everyway I can imagine. Plus, he is awesome! (He hated on my sig once, but I know everyone does.) Anyways, The Battle is something to read when you have not read anything in over a month. It's short story style makes it a good short read and glues you to the story. I couldn't even pull myself off the story yesterday. Anyways, it is full of life and I mean that. THe characters are constantly full of rage and hate (like KUST... NAH, JUST PULLIN' A CHAIN). It's like Mr. T and Richard Simmons staying together in college, where they are entertaining when they are shouting at eachother.
Anyways, the story is perfected. The length is reasonable, the organization is wonderful, and the violence is yet still awesome. It's like Bruce Lee and Chuck Norris fighting again. Except, their angels and demons. Grammar does not matter to me, only the entertaiment is. But, this does not have a flat tire.
The Battle gets 5 Huge Napalming Stars out of 5!
Personal Note: To let you know, KUST, I'm still keeping the sig. Good job and keep it up!
Looks like we got ourselves a newbie around here. But this time, this guy means serious business, even though he is new. QueenOnQueen delivers the interesting story of Dan, a cowboy in the Wild Wild West.
Story: A Cowboy Story
Author: QueenOnQueen
Review:
Gitty up little dawgies! Or was it doggies? Anyways, A Cowboy Story is what we needed. And litterally, that's what we got right now on page 1! The story begins with an entrence and makes itself clear that this is A Cowboy Story. The grammar is good, considering that I don't care about grammar. The plot is starting to expand, but sometimes it takes a while for things to heat up. But, that was a lie that you would expect from a critic from another review thread. This is the perfect speed for a story that has been here for at least a day or so. THe characters are filled half way with life. Sometimes, character dialogue needs the movie script touch, you know what I mean?
Anyways, its good, but needs to fix somethings here and there. Other than that, good work.\
A Cowboy Story gets 4.5 Stars out of 5!
Personal Note: Make dialogue more better. Other than that, it was good. Get us some more outlaws sherrif! I mean, QueenOnQueen.

OK, now on to the Forum Traffic!
Now, as you can see on the Forums Home Page, traffic is increasing since the past few hours. War Stories is starting to get a little slow, due to the fact post are not being posted as usual. The Off-Topic is still being clogged right now. It has been that way since 8 O'clock in the morning! The Suggestions Page is getting a little fast, but should be good for an awesome post. The Clans Page is getting clogged with new clans and groups everyday! So, watch out for some of your post at page 1 or 2. The Media section is getting a little slow and is slowly developing at the same time.
Everywhere else is still slowly developing and post are being produced as we speak. So, thanks for reading the WS/RP Review Center's Traffic Report. I'm Annilator, your host, as always.
Read mah storeh, bum.
Clay McFatness. Revised one. The one with the Glexial in the title. Not the one with spammed exclamation marks.
Do eet.
Alright. I will do that...

Alright, ladies and gents, here is a new segment I will be doing called We Recommend...
This segment will feature stories, games, movies, and alot more. Right now, We Recommend...
Dead Island- A zombie filled game planning for release in Fall this year. The game includes 4 player local and internet play. The story is filled with life-like situations and also an emotional background story and events. Also, its emmense size is enough to say that you are litterally running miles from one end of the island to the other.
Gears of War 3- Epic. 'Nough said. It has 4 player co-op ability and also internet play. Multiplayer is as good as it is ever gonna get. The story is long and meanignful and the characters are still as tough as they were. New weapons are unvailed and new maps are released. Coming out later this year. Epic Games baby!
Battlefield 3- Call of Duty:Modern Warfare 3 looks like a copy and paste of Modern Warfare 2. Doesn't it? Well, Battlefield 3 already won the battle and this time, it has blown COD out of the water and this time, it will stay that way. BF3 includes resurrected maps from BF2 and a story co-op mode. The single player campaign can last more than 20 hours of gameplay with maps so huge, its like you are a real soldier in real warfare! Multiplayer is expected to hold almost 40-60 players per game and destruction is supposed to be tactical and bigger than ever. Say goodbye to COD for me this year, will ya? Releases this year! Gear up soldier!
Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversery- Why not get it? It was the game that revolutionized video games for eternity. Litterally. Games like Battlefield and Call of Duty evolved from Halo. So, shut up COD fanboys, cause you have no lives. Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversery includes an entire campaign that was remade with sick graphics and sound effects. Everything is still there. The Pelicans, the Wart Hogs, the Pillar of Autumn, and more! Drop onto Halo later in October- September for a cheap $30! Say good night again COD.
Dead Rising 2: Off The Record- If you saw the trailer, than you laughed your butt off for more than a few days and hours. The gameplay is the same, except with new enviroments, weapons, combos, and vehicles. Frank West is back and better than ever. It has more humor than you could expect. Prepare for a retail sale! Coming out this year!
E3 has been giving us more than enough, and that's a good thing! It gives some new experiences other than BFH. But, if you don't want any of these, that's fine. I'm just making a segment for the public. That's it!

Stay safe kids and be prepared for another addition of We Recommend next week!
Someone has been watching too much G4TV.

I was doing this just for fun. Besides, it was on a wekkday. I had nothing better to do thatose days. And I thought, why not add a section like this. Make more popular and give some guys that have interest in this stuff fet more of that and reviews of stories.
(14-06-2011 01:28 AM)Annilator Wrote: [ -> ]Alright, ladies and gents, here is a new segment I will be doing called We Recommend...
This segment will feature stories, games, movies, and alot more. Right now, We Recommend...
Dead Island- A zombie filled game planning for release in Fall this year. The game includes 4 player local and internet play. The story is filled with life-like situations and also an emotional background story and events. Also, its emmense size is enough to say that you are litterally running miles from one end of the island to the other.
Gears of War 3- Epic. 'Nough said. It has 4 player co-op ability and also internet play. Multiplayer is as good as it is ever gonna get. The story is long and meanignful and the characters are still as tough as they were. New weapons are unvailed and new maps are released. Coming out later this year. Epic Games baby!
Battlefield 3- Call of Duty:Modern Warfare 3 looks like a copy and paste of Modern Warfare 2. Doesn't it? Well, Battlefield 3 already won the battle and this time, it has blown COD out of the water and this time, it will stay that way. BF3 includes resurrected maps from BF2 and a story co-op mode. The single player campaign can last more than 20 hours of gameplay with maps so huge, its like you are a real soldier in real warfare! Multiplayer is expected to hold almost 40-60 players per game and destruction is supposed to be tactical and bigger than ever. Say goodbye to COD for me this year, will ya? Releases this year! Gear up soldier!
Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversery- Why not get it? It was the game that revolutionized video games for eternity. Litterally. Games like Battlefield and Call of Duty evolved from Halo. So, shut up COD fanboys, cause you have no lives. Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversery includes an entire campaign that was remade with sick graphics and sound effects. Everything is still there. The Pelicans, the Wart Hogs, the Pillar of Autumn, and more! Drop onto Halo later in October- September for a cheap $30! Say good night again COD.
Dead Rising 2: Off The Record- If you saw the trailer, than you laughed your butt off for more than a few days and hours. The gameplay is the same, except with new enviroments, weapons, combos, and vehicles. Frank West is back and better than ever. It has more humor than you could expect. Prepare for a retail sale! Coming out this year!
E3 has been giving us more than enough, and that's a good thing! It gives some new experiences other than BFH. But, if you don't want any of these, that's fine. I'm just making a segment for the public. That's it!
Stay safe kids and be prepared for another addition of We Recommend next week!
To hell with XBox! And you should've talked about hitting the weak point for massive damage.
(14-06-2011 01:28 AM)Annilator Wrote: [ -> ]Battlefield 3- Call of Duty:Modern Warfare 3 looks like a copy and paste of Modern Warfare 2. Doesn't it? Well, Battlefield 3 already won the battle and this time, it has blown COD out of the water and this time, it will stay that way. BF3 includes resurrected maps from BF2 and a story co-op mode. The single player campaign can last more than 20 hours of gameplay with maps so huge, its like you are a real soldier in real warfare! Multiplayer is expected to hold almost 40-60 players per game and destruction is supposed to be tactical and bigger than ever. Say goodbye to COD for me this year, will ya? Releases this year! Gear up soldier!
Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversery- Why not get it? It was the game that revolutionized video games for eternity. Litterally. Games like Battlefield and Call of Duty evolved from Halo. So, shut up COD fanboys, cause you have no lives. Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversery includes an entire campaign that was remade with sick graphics and sound effects. Everything is still there. The Pelicans, the Wart Hogs, the Pillar of Autumn, and more! Drop onto Halo later in October- September for a cheap $30! Say good night again COD.
AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDD BF3 is soooo pwn and you know it, bub. And HALO IS TEH BOMBAH!!!!!!!!! Halo Reach was awesome, but Halo Reach graphics put into Halo: CE?! OMG! I WANT SO BAAAAAD!!!!
And thanks for the review

. I made the story in less than 30 minutes. I lost my USB with my stories and I was DYING to write something!
Annilator, could you possibly give my story, Iron Sights a look over, and possibly review it?
I know it has two chapters, and I am working on the third, but it would be very nice if you could.
Iron Sights are parts that helps you aim better with a weapon. Now, heres a new definition: a story made by ST3V3.
Review:
Now, I know new guys are not the kind of guys you want to hang out with. NAH! Im just kidding. They are and they ahve some skills. The story has good pacing, but sometimes the pacing can be slow or fast. Either way, it is still good. The story's characters are somewhat filled with life. Some characters have their own personality! Which means, that is good! The dialogue, however, needs some juiciness to it. Some of the dialogue can be plain while other dialogue parts can be too exclamatory. The story has its setting done right and the characters, but needs more practice. Other than those, this story has potential and its potential is already showing! Pull up your pants man!
Iron Sights gets 4.7 Stars out of 5!
Personal Note: Fix those issues listed above and you should be in the clear!
KUST, do you still have a prob with my sig?
No. Code Lyoko was a good show. I liked it and never had a prob with your siggy. I was just surprised that anyone actually remembered it.
(14-06-2011 08:28 PM)K.U.S.T. Wrote: [ -> ]No. Code Lyoko was a good show. I liked it and never had a prob with your siggy. I was just surprised that anyone actually remembered it.
Of course everyone remembered Code Lyoko! It was that show that made us all fear cats and blondes when we were seven and made us never use a computer for the next five years.
Amen... I never used the internet after Three weeks. I was also afraid of my ex-girlfriend because she was blonde and she was a cat lover and dog lover. At least she didn't have a gun... If she watched the show, I would of been dead years ago... XD I also thought that my dog would kill me cause he kept growiling every time I turned it on...