Found it. And BTW, this review will be very very very mixed up. So I will just wing it.
Review: What Happens To Spammers
A poem like this needs more.... whats it called? Oh yeah.... more better lyrics. It wasnt that bad though. Only one typo has been discovered and due to the fact that only about 15 people had read it so far. It needs more rhymes and until then, heres your score. You get... 3.7 Stars outta 5 Stars. Prefered Rating: PG-13. (Language) Written By: Loutsik
Personal Note: Please ask a poet for help because I dont know squat about this stuff.
If you think the battle is over, than your flat out wrong! The Story Of Vulcan will drop to you in now!
Review: Story of Vulcan
AirBorne stories always hit the spot and thats what this story did. Vulcan is like any other soldier, except he and his buddies are in deep water. Para-dropping into the town and then taking it is easy, but taking and defending is harder than it looks. This story is creative with turning points that sound like it came out of a history book. What can I say? Its good. But, short chapters keep this from gaining an extra yard. You must remember, make your chapters as long and interesting as possible. The characters need more personality, so that it sounds like they actually made that expression in real life. Make it realistic, but not too realistic. I give this story 4.2 Stars out of 5. Prefered Rating: PG-13 Written By: Antiunit
Personal Note: Do what it says.
Traffice news:
Well, today is looking slow, but do not mistake that. Traffic is growing as it happens. We got some hold ups in Off-Topic and a little bit of over population in the Polls. Also, the Suggestions thread is looking very busy. Yesterday, was busy, but today looks like a long hold up. War Stories and Role Play has been a little fast today as traffic slowly disappears. New Comers is slow as always, but some new traffic is forming. The Clans section is experiencing some traffic today as clans try to get new people in. The others are as always. Thats your traffic today, Im Annilator with The Review Center.
Welcome our old fans. HAVE YOU MISSED US! Its been awhile so here is a big announcment,THERE IS NOW WORD OF A SEQUAL TO ARMOUR OF CONTEMPT! Yes you heard me right. The RP I said would be the hit of this past summer is gonna have a sequal. If your still there Annilator we are back ing buisness!