I know that this thread is a win. But its not just a win... its an awesome win!
Annilator, Since ZAch is taking 2 months since aries is off, can you review my story SHATTER, and Shatter The rise, (2 different Stories) If so, Thanx Ahead
I thought I just review Shatter? But I will review SHATTER 2. I cant see it on the forum.
WERE TAKING A FIELD TRIP AND REVIEWING THE WORLD OF SHATTER 2
SHATTTER 2 REVIEW
This is a short story by the way, so were gonna keep it short too. Its good. Its descriptive. And... its MYSTERIOUS. *Alien Music* Anyways, it explains what happens to the kid's mom and explains some things. But, overall, this story is good. This gets a 4.1 Stars out of 5.
Personal Note: Maybe do this after Shatter: The Sequel.
I will ask questions.... now:
So Nightowl, what kind of stories do you write?
Um, sir, he might not be on. And when is Commander going to be back?
I dont know. Hes here most of the time.
(01-08-2010 05:49 AM)Annilator Wrote: [ -> ]I will ask questions.... now:
So Nightowl, what kind of stories do you write?
Sorry didnt catch this.
I Write Fantasy/ Action/ Drama Stories. Since i've been facsinated by The Impossible since a young age.
My second question: When did you start writting?
(01-08-2010 07:30 AM)Annilator Wrote: [ -> ]My second question: When did you start writting?
Well its funny, this is my 3rd story, Ever, Outside of school.
Oh cool. My third question is:
Are you planning something big for the forum with your writting skills?
(01-08-2010 07:32 AM)Annilator Wrote: [ -> ]Oh cool. My third question is:
Are you planning something big for the forum with your writting skills?
Theres a lot of stuff.
Shatter The Sequel, Is going to be one.
And im also a good soldier, and would just like to announce, me and LOUTISK (Spelled right i hope, im tired
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Are working on a soldier guide, together.
That sounds very great. Loutsik told me about that a while ago. My fourth question:
How many people liked your stories?
(01-08-2010 07:35 AM)Annilator Wrote: [ -> ]That sounds very great. Loutsik told me about that a while ago. My fourth question:
How many people liked your stories?
I would hope all the viewers
But i can't anser that Question, mainly because i don't know, i do know FOR SURE, that at least 26-30 people liked it, as it was given 3 good reviews
Last Question before we end the interview:
What tips do you have for writters?
(01-08-2010 07:38 AM)Annilator Wrote: [ -> ]Last Question before we end the interview:
What tips do you have for writters?
Get your Ideas, Write them, Edit your writing, and put some work into it.
And Annilator, I have a preview for you. But i'm waiting to see if i may share it ?
Sure thing man. Since the Center has a preview feature. Go ahead and share it.
(Will only make sense if you read the series, and The rise PT 1 and 2)
Shatter: The Sequel
Prologue:
He Jumps. He Misses. He Dies.
Dies…Again…For the second time. How? Well….
Chapter 1
“Attacks Have Been futile” The Reporter is barely able to say, running low of breath.
“But we cannot give up our hope or our beliefs.” He Says.
“The Humans have to win, they started this war, and the humans are going to end it!” Cheers are heard.
“Now’s our chance, Lion. We need to take them down, one by one.” Elite Eli, Said.
“I don’t know Eli, Why do we hunt them? We can’t kill them for no reason.”
“We need to get rid of them so we can focus on the hidden enemy our leader predicts will rise.”
“Who is that?”
“No One knows, Everyone thinks he will be an evil lord, or kill half the population of both races, we’re just trying to spare humans of the anguish and all the-
That’s all he said.
A single Figure flew by at top speeds, through some portal. Mr.Brown! He’d died ten years ago! How is this possible?
“Your alive…”
“I always was.” He Said, “That was my brother, twins suck sometimes.”
“Where have you been?” I asked.
“The Future Lion. it’s a horrible one.”
“Take me there.” I said “ I want to see it.”
He threw me through the portal, as we got out, I looked around.
.”It’s a giant Wasteland.” I said.
“No Lion, Its your hometown.” Mr. Brown said.
Interesting dude. Thanks for coming today. It has been a pleasure seeing you here.
